Killing Me Softly

There are so, so many things still wrong with this picture. Mostly lighting related and just plain busy-ness. It was an epic idea to start with. And it actually looks better without the powers but the powers were the point. I will toy with this I'm sure for a long time to come.

Be light on the critique please. I've been working on this way too long. I'd like it to rest without thought for a while if you get my drift.

For the comic behind this pic:
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