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Page 112 of my webcomic, Star Cross'd Destiny : [link]
This is one of those pages that suffers from the lack of being in print. You really need the next page to get the full effect. Which kinda sucks since it just kinda sits by itself.
You'll notice Shades's eyes lit up in the first panel but no power was emitted. Hmm...
Anyway, this page was meant to have two more panels in it but they all got moved to the next page (hence my complaint about the print thing) so that the action gets a little more spread out. Chief goes nuts but I guess we all expected that to happen. ^_^ I'm not too happy with the scripting here in Juno's dialogue but I'm too lazy to mess with it and I really don't think it's that obtrusive. It's not typical of her which may be why I don't like it - a little out of character but in this situation I don't think I'd be in character either if I was her. *shrugs*
This is one of those pages that suffers from the lack of being in print. You really need the next page to get the full effect. Which kinda sucks since it just kinda sits by itself.
You'll notice Shades's eyes lit up in the first panel but no power was emitted. Hmm...
Anyway, this page was meant to have two more panels in it but they all got moved to the next page (hence my complaint about the print thing) so that the action gets a little more spread out. Chief goes nuts but I guess we all expected that to happen. ^_^ I'm not too happy with the scripting here in Juno's dialogue but I'm too lazy to mess with it and I really don't think it's that obtrusive. It's not typical of her which may be why I don't like it - a little out of character but in this situation I don't think I'd be in character either if I was her. *shrugs*
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its very good, juno does seem a bit like a distressed damsel, but im sure there will be a reason behind it 
